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    Kazz

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    New Story I made.

    Post by Kazz on Sun Apr 19, 2009 8:56 pm

    No its not bout Maple!

    I think is good so far. Heres the Prologue.

    Prologue
    Everyone has something guarding them. Some people don’t even know of their existence. They don’t know until the guardians show themselves. There are a variety of guardians. Sprites, Fairies, Genies, and the occasional elf or giant. Some people get lucky and they come from nowhere because they did a good deed. But even though all the guardians want good some have magic. Magic does twisted things to humans minds. Especially the ones that are evil. It turns them into Lours. Lours are the people who became cruel and twisted because they found out of there guardians magic. They do horrible things. Even though most people go cruel and fight amongst each other, there is one fairy. His power is stronger then anyone else’s. This fairies name is Zyax.
    Zyax’s duty was to train the mimic. The mimic is a person who is trained into knowing everything of the magical world, Magestica, the Dark Realm, and Earth. The mimic is also the person who gets all the power from Zyax once he or she finishes training. There is only one mimic now…And this is how the war between all realms started.


    Tell me what you think about it pl0x Razz.
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    Lilly
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    Re: New Story I made.

    Post by Lilly on Sun Apr 19, 2009 9:00 pm

    Ohh, sounds really interesting. 8D

    But I think your sentences are a bit too short. o-o
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    Kazz

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    Re: New Story I made.

    Post by Kazz on Sun Apr 19, 2009 9:08 pm

    im already on chapter 10, and trust me, i have sentences that are VERY long.
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    Re: New Story I made.

    Post by Lilly on Sun Apr 19, 2009 9:08 pm

    Mkay then. :3
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    Starrr

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    Re: New Story I made.

    Post by Starrr on Sun Apr 19, 2009 9:31 pm

    that sounds really good! Very Happy
    it sounds complicated ^^
    thats good. :]
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    Whatshername

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    Re: New Story I made.

    Post by Whatshername on Sun Apr 19, 2009 9:38 pm

    Sounds cool! Can't wait. :]
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    Katlin

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    Re: New Story I made.

    Post by Katlin on Thu May 07, 2009 5:57 pm

    sounds awesome write it soon please? Very Happy

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