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    The Loveable Kaze

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    Epic Poetry Thread

    Post by The Loveable Kaze on Wed Apr 15, 2009 10:54 pm

    For those of you that were part of the old Bellocan Forums, you will definately remember this. For those of you who were not, this is how it works. Post poetry. A lot of poetry. Only original poems, mind you, yes. Also, you are welcome to comment on any poems, but try to keep it on topic. Anyways, I'll be posting some periodically, and I would like to see many of your guys' as well. Okay...sooooo....START POSTING! =O


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    Re: Epic Poetry Thread

    Post by chibiichigo on Wed Apr 15, 2009 11:06 pm

    written at 4 am one morning

    Pain.
    Hurt.
    Fear.
    Love.
    Jealousy.
    You embody these.
    And yet,
    I detest it.
    I detest it all.
    I detest you.
    I love you.
    I hate you.
    You liar.
    You fake.
    I love you.
    You hurt me.
    The cycle goes on.
    Pain hurt fear jealousy love
    Pain hurt fear jealousy love
    Pain hurt fear jealousy love
    Emptiness.
    Darkness.
    Suicide.






    Quite fun. Its not really poetic but its what i was feeling at the time.

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    Re: Epic Poetry Thread

    Post by YummyLynn on Wed Apr 15, 2009 11:41 pm

    As soon as the dawn breaks,
    all the pain washes away.
    Never again will you reminisce,
    the times you broke down.
    Fears replaced by dreams,
    hope is suddenly an option.
    With due time,
    you remember how to smile.

    Written during my emo time. (:
    Enjoy i guess?
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    Re: Epic Poetry Thread

    Post by Lilly on Wed Apr 15, 2009 11:49 pm

    "What time is it?"
    A question repeated many times.
    We're so confined to this daily lifestyle.
    Just stop.
    Don't rush.
    Take a stroll in the woods.
    Stop and smell the roses.
    Don't worry about being late.
    Forget the time.
    Just stop.
    And think.
    About what you did last year.
    Last month, last week, yesterday.
    Most likely, not much has changed.
    Stuck.
    We're stuck.
    In the same cycle each day.
    Always knowing where we're going.
    Always trying to be "safe".
    Don't you dare look at that clock.
    Don't worry, be free.
    For just one minute,
    Just stop.

    LOL...Fail. Written for school, so of course it sucks. o-o;; ( I was trying to mock the kids who were just going "WTF RHYMES WITH ORANGE?!" [They didn't like my poem cause it didn't rhyme. o:] )

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    Re: Epic Poetry Thread

    Post by YummyLynn on Thu Apr 16, 2009 12:13 am

    orange & door hinge. Smile
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    Re: Epic Poetry Thread

    Post by chibiichigo on Thu Apr 16, 2009 12:22 am

    psuedo rhymes are awwwwwwwwwwwesome
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    Re: Epic Poetry Thread

    Post by Whatshername on Thu Apr 16, 2009 1:36 pm

    Ah, poetry. Very Happy



    My father and I
    One dark, pretty evening
    Went outside to gaze upon stars.
    Stargazing, he called it.
    He took out his telescope
    Glinting silver paint
    And set it up on the smooth green grass.

    And as we looked through magnified glass
    I turned to him, and asked my dad
    "Do stars have glinting telescopes
    And set them up in daytime
    And gaze upon people
    And call it peoplegazing?"

    And my father turned to me and said
    "The stars glow and shine
    And are nice to look at.
    Humans fight and pollute...
    Why gaze upon them?"
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    Re: Epic Poetry Thread

    Post by SkylerOcon on Thu Apr 16, 2009 5:40 pm

    My puppets, they fight
    I guide them against each other
    Nothing but a perpetual plight

    They scream in agony
    I make them continue
    Never to achieve harmony

    The conflict it continues
    My hands command it
    The puppets following their cues

    My puppets, they are worn
    I continue to play with them
    The clothes tattered and torn

    They plead for redress
    I instead choose my pleasure
    The puppets doomed to be a mess

    The clothes become more ravaged
    My hands do not care
    The puppets become more savaged

    My puppets, they grow tiring
    “Tommy, time for dinner!”
    My puppets, they die
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    Re: Epic Poetry Thread

    Post by Whatshername on Thu Apr 16, 2009 8:49 pm

    xIcky wrote:the poison that rots my body,
    stick the needle in
    just one last time
    I swear this is the last one.

    pour it in
    fill the void
    make me feel human again.
    just this one more time.

    the toxin that erodes my mind,
    one more puff
    just one last time
    I swear this is the last one.

    just give me my poison
    just once more
    I swear it will be just once more.
    just let me feel wanted again.
    that’s all I desire.

    I don’t want this addiction
    I don’t want your love
    I don’t want your pity
    I want to be wanted.

    So stick the needle in
    inject your poison in my vein
    until you rot my brain
    the heart is a poisoned organ.
    it was torn to pieces long ago
    but it serves it’s purpose.
    it pumps the poison.
    it fuels the addiction.
    so give me my poison once more.
    please just this last time.

    -------------------
    yay for late night procrastination from papers... I don't do drugs btw. 'case you were worried about me.



    Lovely stuff, this is. Very Happy
    Well, you couldn't really call it lovely, since it's about drugs and addictions...
    But, y'know. It's nicely written. Lol.

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    Re: Epic Poetry Thread

    Post by Icky on Thu Apr 16, 2009 8:53 pm

    Bellaaa wrote:Lovely stuff, this is. Very Happy
    Well, you couldn't really call it lovely, since it's about drugs and addictions...
    But, y'know. It's nicely written. Lol.
    I think there is still too much punctuation in it. I just wrote it now, so it still needs a bit of work.

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