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    Sensuous Skin

    Post by blizen on Sat Jun 25, 2011 12:58 pm

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    Ahead of time, I am sorry for any offenses placed on Lilly and Emily, of course I don't see you girls this way in way whatsoever.So before you go crazy with rage and ban me, at least finish reading it. I found the romance actually had enough of the authors touch to be worth a sit through.Also read the bottom spoiler when finished for the notes

    Sensuous Skin
    Today had been no less exciting. Aside from the incredibly sweet things Lilly had done for her like breakfast in bed, her touches around the boat as they sailed back to their holiday island had become more purposeful and passion filled. Now they spoke of intense longing and desire rather than mere playfulness. On one occasion Lilly had pressed her against the side of the yacht, wrapping one arm around her rear and one about her shoulders and spending a good few minutes deep kissing her whilst caressing her body. She'd had real trouble keeping her moans low enough that Tyler, in his cabin, wouldn't hear. As ever though, with her body at Lilly's complete mercy, Lilly left her trembling and craving her all the more.

    Emily sighed as she stared out at the moonlit sea. All those touches burnt into my body, surely she won't let them go to waste.

    There was a click as the bathroom door opened in the room behind and she trembled, slowly looking around to see Lilly wearing her stripy blue and white PJ's. Lilly walked across the room to her bedroom and as Emily re-entered the living room she turned and said with a seductive smile,

    "You're going for a shower, right?" Emily nodded.

    "Then night," Lilly said softly and continued on into her room, shutting the door behind her.

    Why? Have I done something wrong? Did she decide I wasn't worth the bother or does she want me to make the next move...I...I want her so badly!

    Emily went and grabbed a towel and white dressing gown from her room then showered, all the time in a state of flux and confusion. The shower didn't take long and soon she was standing back in the shadowed living room in her fluffy gown, everything thrown into sharp relief by the bright moonlight.

    Do I go to her? I might wake her, or is she planning for me to go to ultimately win the bet? Suddenly Emily realized that that had to be right. It fitted Lilly's nature so perfectly. She's saying to me that if her wooing wasn't good enough don't come. So I can make her lose the bet if I want too, but she also knows that she's been so good that there's no way I can do that. A sense of awe and pure elation coursed through her system.

    That's my girlfriend! But is it really safe to do it here in the chalet with her dad close by? Ah, I'm wet and my whole bodies pulsing so strongly. I'm in this state and we haven't even begun. I need her touch so much! I'm not ashamed to admit it but I hope I can make her feel the same sort of desire for me in time.

    She approached Lilly's door quietly and whispered,

    "Lilly," before realizing the thin bamboo door was ever so slightly ajar, not noticeable unless you were close up. She carefully pushed it open and her eyes rested upon...an empty room.

    Arrrgh! How long can she keep making me chase her! Wait, there's something on the bed.

    On the bed lay a beautiful, lacy black bra with some sexy black knickers. By it a piece of paper read, 'Come to our cove – I'll be waiting for you, my love XD.' There was another glass doorway leading out onto a balcony and steps to the beach that was also slightly ajar. Their cove was a small one about twenty minutes walk away. A cozy little beach surrounded by high sided rock walls.

    Hmmph! L...like I'll go across an island, albeit deserted, at this time of night with that on! Emily let her mind protest but she knew only to well it protested in vain. Five minutes later the underwear, note and Emily were gone from the room.

    Twenty minutes later she found herself stepping from the ridge that ran down the face of the back cliff wall of the cove onto the sandy beach. As she had traveled down she had watched a dark haired figure in a pearl white, two piece bathing costume swimming about the bay. About two thirds of the way down she'd clearly been spotted though for Lilly was now only a few meters away.

    Emily stopped, unsure of what to do or say. Before her stood Lilly with her breasts perfectly framed by the pearl bra and the tight pearl swimming trunks showing off her thighs, her whole body dripping wet. Lilly didn't say a thing for a few seconds but her eyes did all the talking for her. So warm and longing?

    Lilly turned and beckoned and she, of course, followed as they waded out into the shallows. Then Lilly suddenly turned and approached her making her chest tighten. It wasn't the first time Lilly's face had moved to within inches of her own or that Lilly's arms had wrapped about her shoulders or that Lilly's legs had moved so softly against her own, but the look Lilly was giving her made it feel like it was.

    "Emily," Lilly breathed out sensually as her hands slowly massaged her shoulders. "If you could have anything in the whole wide world what would it be?" The answer came to her lips as naturally as breathing.

    "You." Lilly's mouth closed the gap as her sweet breath filled Emily's face and then Lilly's warm, wet tongue filled her mouth. With slow and passionate sweeps Lilly's tongue mixed and mingled with her own tongue before dipping into her saliva, stroking inside of her cheeks and running along her teeth. This kiss didn't end too soon but was long, loving and perfect. By the time it finished Emily knew she was once again putty in Lilly's hands.

    "Ah!" Gasped Lilly as she pulled away and her eyes shone with delight and she wasn't finished with her little game yet. She slipped around behind Emily and her hands began fumbling with Emily's black bra. "And who do you want to spend the rest of your life with?" Lilly whispered again.

    "You." The bra came off and Emily felt Lilly's hands slip round her back to cup her breasts. A warm wet nip to her left earlobe made her twitch in pleasure followed by a second. After every short pause another gentle caressing lick or nibble set her skin on fire as Lilly began to trail kisses down her neck. With shock Emily realized the faint moans she could hear were escaping from her mouth and that under Lilly's guiding, molding hands her nipples were now fully erect.

    "You're so beautiful Emily," Lilly whispered as her tongue ran playfully up Emily's neck. Her left hand slipped down to Emily's underwear where it teased the flimsy material and threatened to go lower.

    "Final question," Lilly said and her voice dropped, so seductive that Emily's whole body felt like melting into the water and turning to steam simultaneously. "Was my wooing world class?" Her left fingers ran a little deeper, entering the thin foliage of hair that hid Emily's entrance.

    There weren't any suitable words to describe how good Lilly's wooing had been, and besides Emily's couldn't think of any profound ones in her current state so Lilly had to settle for,

    "God, yes!"

    Even as she spoke she felt Lilly's left hand reach her moistened opening and start flicking and rubbing the entrance. She wasn't sure how she was still standing as the warm ocean swirled about her legs and in the distance somberly roared its approval. Lilly's right hand had slipped down to release her panties from her waist into the water. Emily stepped out of them and let them drift away with the tide then gasped as Lilly slid a leg up between her thighs to rub her clitoris and Lilly's left hand threatened to begin penetrating her dripping virgin space. Lilly's right hand slid back up the right side of her body to her right breast where it both supported her shaking body and occasionally caressed her right and left breasts. All the time Lilly's busts were pressing tight against her back and Lilly's warm mouth planted ever deeper licks and kisses across and along her neck.

    "Awahhh!" she cried as Lilly slid her up and down upon her leg. Each slide sent silent screams of pleasure through her body whilst Lilly's left thumb and the finger next to it pried her hole open. Then something warm and hard slid into her tight entrance as her body slid down Lilly's leg. She felt Lilly's finger inside of her and her whole body cried out inside with deep pleasure. A fire of steaming hot liquid churned between her thighs and every movement of that finger made it hotter and swirled it faster.

    Her head arched back and round searching for Lilly, for something to distract her from the unbearable pleasure in her aching groin. Her lips found Lilly's and she gurgled as Lilly sucked her in as Lilly's hand now moved more softly and sensuously inside Emily's body and on the parts that were paralyzing and shaking Emily the most. Emily broke the kiss with saliva dripping from her mouth because the tension inside of her was too much.

    Lilly sensed her tighten and heard the beginning of her final cry and so thrust a second finger in with the first. Not too fast or slow but smoothly enough to reach as far up inside Emily as possible at the peak of her cry.

    "Liiiiilllyyyyyy!"

    Lilly smiled as she withdrew her fingers from Emily and let the fluid spill out of Emily and down her leg. Then she slid Emily down through it until she was sitting in the shallow water gasping and shaking.

    Emily drunk in deep breaths of the ocean air barely feeling the mild water slop about her as her body returned to normal. Whatever normal is? After that I just don't know.

    Seconds later, having scooped and licked some of Emily's juice off her own leg, Lilly crawled round to straddle Emily's form. Her face now wore a more hopeful and less grown up look.

    "Did I do okay?" She asked, nervously scratching the back of her hair that was a lot more out of place than usual. "I mean I had to act confident to be the best woo-er but I was really kinda nervous that I'd make a mess of things."

    Emily smiled. This is also what I love about her. Not only does she have the life and energy I feed off but I can also be the figure she draws comfort and support from. In our weakness we are made strong by our partner. She drew Lilly in to her and this time it was her tongue that moved smoothly into Lilly's mouth, running over Lilly's teeth and mixing and twisting with Lilly's tongue. When she pulled away she said,

    "I'd have loved you anyway Lilly but you were fantastic! I really should take more care just how far I push you in your dares because I swear I almost died from the pleasure."

    Lilly blushed, so sweetly that Emily couldn't hold back the desire to inflict some revenge in return for losing the bet. She eased Lilly around and down into the shallows where the warm water was an inch deep and then slunk seductively over Lilly, Emily's form perfectly lit by the moonlight behind.

    "Now that you've aroused me Lilla don't think that you can escape!"

    I'm glad Lilla was so nervous though. It makes my nerves seem much more normal and boy do I want to take her now and show her what I can do! The question of whether Lilly found her as attractive didn't even enter her mind. If the way Lilly had handled her body seconds ago wasn't enough proof the looks Lilly was giving her body now were way beyond lustrous.

    "Mmmmm" Emily sighed in pleasure as she let her hands slip round Lilly's back to untie her bra. "Now here's something I've been longing to see for months."

    "Just to see?" Lilly queried in mock innocence as the white bra went the way of Emily's underwear to release her large and busty boobs. Emily's reply was to move her head down and swallow her right breast.

    Something warm and wet brushed Lilly's already erect nipple, trailing up her breast and then smoothly returning to re-run over her nipple. All the time Emily's lips were massaging the skin around the path of Emily's tongue. Emily's mouth played havoc with Lilly's nipples for some time turning slow circles around them, pinching them between her lips and sucking and pulling at them whilst her long tongue occasionally ran up and down the valley between her breasts.

    Then Emily let her hands take over. Freeing them on the objects of her desire where they gently teased higher and louder moans from Lilly's mouth as they rubbed, stroked and rolled over her nipples. Emily's eyes eventually left Lilly's breasts as Lilly's gasps became louder and her moans more arousing. Emily let her gaze drift downwards over Lilly's beautiful curving body to her sex that was being gently lapped by the warm water, which mingled with a trickle of lubricant. Smoothly Emily arched down again and began licking and kissing her way down from Lilly's breasts towards Lilly's opening. Lilly felt Emily's smooth touch run lower and gave a groan of anticipation.

    She's over my belly button and now at my straggly hair. Oh God! Her tongue's forcing my legs open and now her hands are running down my sides to my behind.

    Lilly's own hands gripped and dug into the soft sand as Emily eased her sex upwards. Emily held it before her waiting mouth, allowing the smell to stir her. Then she gave it an experimental lick.

    Mmmmm, not quite how I expected it taste but somewhat nice. A creamy liquid. She hungrily moved in for more, enjoying the feel of Lilly's body trembling helplessly in her grasp. And I'm the only one allowed to make her feel this helpless! This time she gave Lilly's soft tight opening a longer deeper lick causing Lilly to cry out her name. She barely heard though as she let her tongue probe deeper and deeper inside Lilly, sucking on her opening with passion.

    Lilly felt her nails bruising her hands as her hands clenched tighter and pushed further into the sand. Her whole body was arched with her hair underwater and her face pointed skywards. Far away she could feel her hips trembling and groin close to bursting as Emily's long, warm tongue probed and pushed its way further into her until she wasn't sure how she'd live if it was removed. The bursting feeling in her hips traveled upwards to her chest and then her head. Her whole body was flexible and yet inside it felt like the whole of heaven was crammed so tightly that the slightest movement would rip her to shreds.

    Then the tongue stopped and slowly retreated. It felt as though the world was suddenly empty and that she was all alone. She began trembling until Emily's face, so beautiful, rose over her own.

    "Shall we call the result of the bets a draw?" Emily asked letting her right hand tickle Lilly's lowering pussy. Lilly shivered and her groin jerked back up.

    "Yes," she said desperately.

    "And as I'm yours forever, will you be mine?" Emily asked softly as she ran her finger round the inner rim of Lilly's hole, the moonlight making a halo about her hair.

    "Yes!" Lilly almost screamed and then did as Emily's right fingers powerfully pushed themselves deep inside her. They moved in and out with strong graceful motions and in seconds the internal agony of pleasure had risen to an even greater height. Finally it consumed her so that she was left hollering Emily's name into the night air as the orgasm took her and the agony faded in a flow of liquid from her legs to the sea. A second later and Emily's mouth took her own. Emily's breasts pressed between hers and Emily's legs entwined with her own. After some time of deep breaths and kisses her body felt weak but back to normal, her soul eternally shared and merged with Emily's.

    "Was I good?" Emily whispered and Lilly grinned.

    "You were awesome!" She said happily and rolled Emily over so that she was on top before giving her another deep kiss.

    A while later they sat huddled on the beach with their nightgowns on. Before them the horizon glowed orange as the sky above paled. By the time they'd finished making love the second time and had washed off it was almost dawn so Lilly had suggested they wait to see the sunrise. The night and water had been warm so it wasn't uncomfortable and Lilly had brought a pair of towels with her to dry off.

    "Shouldn't we head back soon?" Emily suggested halfheartedly. " I mean your dad…" Lilly smiled and nestled closer.

    "I think he sort of knows actually." She knew, even without looking, that Emily's face wore its surprised, left eyebrow half-raised, look. "Well I told him we were going out a couple of days ago and that we were in a serious relationship and he was fine with that. Plus he's used to me being out and about at all hours and times. Even if he pieced together what we were up to tonight I don't think he'd be all that upset. After all, you're the person who saved both his and my life."

    "And you're the one who saved mine," Emily whispered back. "Not directly, but before you came I was slipping away to nothing and my family were just a cold and isolated unit. You were the person who actually made me want to live life rather than just exist. In you I am complete."

    "Ahhh," Lilly sighed contentedly and she reached up and gave Emily another soft, slow kiss. "You say the most beautiful things Emily. I really do love you so much!"

    Emily smiled and held her closer as a bright yellow ray shot across the horizon and lit up the bay with fresh morning light. Gulls circled and cried overhead as the sea took on a shiny turquoise hue streaked with frosted waves.

    "I'm so glad, Lilly. I love you too!"

    They remained there for some time watching the sunrise fill the world around them with light and life, knowing it was no match for that born within them during the stillness of the night.

    [spoiler]I don't own this Fan fiction yada yada..Names have been changed yada yada..The original is here http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5356877/1/Sensuous_Skin

    After reading it, I now want to change the roles of the girls. Seems like Emily should be the one leading while Lilly just goes with it. You know, be the 'innocent' one i guess.
    The whole time I really was thinking, "LillyxEmily just doesn't sound as good as I though but hell the original Fiction was hot either way" those I chose this one.
    Again, I hope you read it before you Moderators went "BAN TYLER NOW" on it :/
    At least 65 minutes went into proof reading this and with completion of editing, music really does help take 'tedious' out of moments like these

    By the way I am still sorry for any offenses placed on Lilly and Emily, you girls no we don't think of you two this way


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    Re: Sensuous Skin

    Post by Lilly on Sat Jun 25, 2011 6:34 pm

    Tyler, this is the stupidest thing you've done IMO and I really do have half a mind to ban you, but I actually like this forum half alive.

    So I'm just gonna ask you to remove this from the site. Please just take it, put it in a word document if you must, but just get it off this website.
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    Re: Sensuous Skin

    Post by blizen on Sat Jun 25, 2011 9:18 pm

    I saw this coming so I put it in a word document well after the editing was done.

    I have to ask, did you at least read it, or did you stop at the title and go straight for the warning?
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    Re: Sensuous Skin

    Post by Whatshername on Sun Jun 26, 2011 4:33 pm

    ^Why would she read it?
    Dude, straight girls don't like yuri
    To think that was a no-brainer LOL
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    Re: Sensuous Skin

    Post by Danneh on Sun Jun 26, 2011 5:23 pm

    No, really, I wanna know too.

    Did she at least skim it?
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    Re: Sensuous Skin

    Post by Skittles on Sun Jun 26, 2011 5:26 pm

    Some straight girls like yuri. O_o

    Some lesbians like yaoi...


    Yeah, it's a strange world alright. :\
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    Post by Whatshername on Sun Jun 26, 2011 6:59 pm

    I skimmed it, got grossed out and closed it.
    Seriously, what's the point of this, besides giving guys boners? Fuzztard's treating it like some kind of art form, it's stupid, don't expect her to read it, especially if it's got her and her best friend since elementary's names in it. -rolls eyes-

    Just take it off the damn site.
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    Post by Danneh on Sun Jun 26, 2011 7:27 pm

    Personally I think it's fucking hilarious.

    It'd be more amusing if you actually wrote it yourself, Ty, instead of jacking a random fic from FF.net and changing names around. Meh.
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    Re: Sensuous Skin

    Post by Skittles on Sun Jun 26, 2011 7:35 pm

    It should be blamed on me because I suggested it out of boredom.

    But, I expected something more...original. Well, I've moved on to other projects, so this shipping will be swept under the rug.
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    Post by Whatshername on Sun Jun 26, 2011 7:44 pm

    ..Mentos, your signature's a giant mindfuck.
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    Post by Skittles on Sun Jun 26, 2011 7:46 pm

    Yeah.
    Mission accomplished.
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    Re: Sensuous Skin

    Post by Lilly on Mon Jun 27, 2011 7:50 pm

    Skimmed. Well, now I know I don't like yuri.
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